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the most precious gift
Contributed by
babygirl2004
on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 08:44:42 PM in AEST
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The first time I saw you,I cried
when i held you i was full of pride
my baby girl had finally arrived
on that hot august nite you
came into this world not knowing
what it held for you but you met
it with a smile your little hands and
big feet you were the sweetest little
angel I wanted the best for you and
I tried to give you a life but in the end
I failed but I know that u will have a
better life with your daddy so baby
just remember I love you always
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babygirl2004
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2004-07-05 20:44:42]
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Re: the most precious gift
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:09:12 PM AEST
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so touching. hoping one day you will be re-united forever.
the voice
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Re: the most precious gift
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:24:50 PM AEST
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| *TEARS* |
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Re: the most precious gift
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:09:28 AM AEST
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I wish more girls/women thought of their baby's future. So many girls/women only think of themselves and what they want. You're a good mom. Some day your daughter will know that you loved her. This poem is a wonderful testament of that love.
Keep writing and good luck.
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Re: the most precious gift
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:39:24 AM AEST
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(((((HUGS))))) awwww , such a sad write... I too hope that you will be one day reunited with your daughter....
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: the most precious gift
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by WestCPunk on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:25:32 PM AEST
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Well your daughter should be very happy that she knows that you love her....I couldn't say that about mine
It was very well written good job
Shelbi |
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