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Touch The Breeze Softly
Contributed by
mdmorash
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 07:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sonnet #3
Touch the breeze softly, and feel its caress.
Feel the rain gently. It’s falling in time.
With a bird singing its heavenly chime.
Take her hand tightly and make her confess.
Know that the lonely are lost in distress.
Give her your heartbeat, and tell her your rhyme.
Share with her feelings, to love is no crime.
Don’t hide your meaning. This you must profess.
Her eyes are not blind. She sees what you do.
So show her you’re true, someone she can trust.
And take on her needs, relieving her pain.
For her you must live, forget long past lusts.
Then show her your dreams, and share in hers too.
And soon, by the dawn, you’re born once again.
Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2004
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mdmorash
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2004-07-05 19:37:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Touch The Breeze Softly
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:07:18 AM AEST (User
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this was a really good poem perhaps better than the previous one I read. However it was not a sonnet a sonnet is 14 lines while this one had 15. Still a beautiful poem very soothing.
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Re: Touch The Breeze Softly
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:42:40 AM AEST (User
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really beautiful, flowing and lovely:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
*whispers to joel, have a cuppa and count those lines again...*
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Re: Touch The Breeze Softly
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:34:42 AM AEST (User
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wow, i really liked this, it was lovely,
pixie xx |
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