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Poisoned
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:40:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Poisoned with thoughts of her
I can't think straight
I'm looking for her face
She's making my heart race
This is not what I had intended
But somehow she's taken over my mind
Her smile warms my day
She steals my breath away
I feel like I'm a spinning top
I'm getting so confused
I want my world to say fixed
But she's making things all mixed
I get that rush in my stomach
Every time I re-call her face
I lose track whenever we talk
She's putting bounce back in my walk
~*~
But she's just supposed to be a friend
And this dream will have to end...
~*~
Jaime Moran
July 5, 2004
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2004-07-05 16:40:53]
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Re: Poisoned
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:49:00 PM AEST
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beautifully sweet kiddo:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Poisoned
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:57:30 PM AEST
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"supposed to be".... ah geez... I hate those words.
This is wonderfully honest - and - somehow terribly sad at the same time. Dare to dream! Who cares if it doesn't make sense.
Living somewhere outside of supposed-to,
SNM |
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Re: Poisoned
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 07:32:23 PM AEST
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good poem I've been where u describe and its definitely a hard, frustrating place to be so I wish you all the best and to keep on writing.
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Re: Poisoned
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by Kirby on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 08:57:08 PM AEST
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| You poor thing, darn falling for someone anyhow! lol! Welll this was a great poem. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Poisoned
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:26:46 AM AEST
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very good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Poisoned
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:54:06 AM AEST
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Heh, that reminds me of a dream I had... every time I saw his face i'd just swoon, he had such a fine ass, six-pack and all, short hair and MmmmHmmm just edible. Then he married Jennifer Anniston *sniffs* She's a stupid biatch too, even if she is prettyish
lmao
Your sis
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