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A bird (falcon) with holy loves

Contributed by cauchy3 on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:11:48 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

A bird ( falcon ) with holly loves

Do not weep with your fail

Let me fly up with fate

Of the loves that are far

We are breeds of the fair

You have stabs by my paws

AS a bird it never crawl

It is lives to be calm

Let all dogs are not called

May I sit on some plants

There roars and some pains

While one jump when we passed

Let me fly with my plays

I have white in your red

Because you are my preys

It is rally for peak

They are rocs that you pet

We have gases with our prizes

On the sky few are piled

We can strike on one pill

They have bloods that are spill

We are whales to other pall

We are threads to the palms

I have keys for your paces

Near to hell other have pales

Many are birds down on pins

I have grace to give spikes

I have gains on few spins

I have plunges in one span

On the sky my I am fit

It is all we are first

On one strike they lost lives

Not more cats I can find

I have gifts for my fates

Let me chase on your things

There are bows there are races

When there rains we are late

Let us filch as in field

I am sharp and with fiefs

With not laws I don’t faint

I have logics won’t for falls

We do bleed with our bloods

We have classes others are low

We have fleshes down on roads

As we fly the bows loaded

We have wings that are wide

We are free and are wise

We are up on the winds

We have graces even are wild
------end of verse –by cheung shun sang=cauchy3=laplace181-----------------

Copyright Â© cauchy3 ... [ 2004-07-05 16:11:48]
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Re: A bird (falcon) with holy loves (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:21:20 PM AEST
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I soooo wish this had not been double spaced, it would have read so much better. But this had a great mystical feel to it which I liked alot!!! I wrote one about falcon's also, titled Falcon's Lure. They hold such mystery, great for us poets/poetess' to observe. Well done here,cauchy!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

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