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You Lied
Contributed by
devils_daughter18
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you said you would not hurt me,,,
said you would wipe away my tears...
but all u have done is make me cry...
and increased my greatest fears!!!
you said you would care...
no matter what i say...
but u traeted me like *****...
in every *****in way...
i tried to prove to u some how...
that i really did care....
but how can i try to help....
if you treat me unfair....
you told me i was beautiful...
said you would never do me wrong....
i must have ***** up....
cuz you weren't around that long...
i have cried the tears i needed to cry...
now it's time to finally smile...
at least as far as i think....
but it won't happen for a while!
you cut.....
at one point i did too...
almost killed yourself....
***** i am just like you....
so why start to hate me....
why start to talk *****???
i am 10 seconds away....
from saying i quit...
i want you to understand....
why i said what i said....
i have lost so many people...
people that cared for me are dead...
now i am alone...
with no one by my side...
said you would never make me cry....
but i fear that u have lied!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: You Lied
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by pixie on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:52:06 PM AEST
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sorry for your pain, great write tho....
pixie xx |
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Re: You Lied
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by babygirl2004 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:07:19 PM AEST
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| good poem it comes from the heart and thats what makes it good |
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Re: You Lied
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:15:07 PM AEST
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Sad poetics of a wounded angel. I'm sorry for the past. But tomorrow's a new day, And one day all people should have the feeling of shelter. And that shelter might not be a house, but it will keep you dry.
This is the weirdest life I've ever lived.
But i believe it's in you, I believe in you.I believe you will make it thru, so please take care. My prayers of comfort go out to you. |
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