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Wandering
Contributed by
Sinful_Misery
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Seemingly complex, yet exceedingly intriguing
thoughts unfold, but I find myself yielding,
whether or not to make sense of the situation,
perhaps it's a figment of my vivid imagination
One thing is for certain, I can feel it is true,
it's like my sanctuary at heart, with exceptions make do,
a deep piece of intellect, waiving my faith,
it's like the sun and the moon, so slow and so paced,
With windows and doors, and long hallways and lights,
I feel as if I am dreaming, and perhaps I am right
To be known, to be seen, is something so true,
but at times the perception, is difficult to undo
A fight and a battle, makes nothing but war,
only I am able to understand, my concepts galore,
To see and to fathom, are two different things,
but one thing's for sure, my mind will always keep;
wandering.
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Re: Wandering
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:16:54 AM AEST
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I like the meandering quality of this. Its not overtly rhymed, and you kept me reading along 'till the end, with the apt descriptor of the title, which I like using too.
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Re: Wandering
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:19:48 PM AEST
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| you capture a nice feeling of wandering good work. |
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Re: Wandering
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:10:49 PM AEST
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| ::applauds:: i loved this. |
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