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Suicides Siren
Contributed by
Destiny
on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:23:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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These thoughts they sing to me
telling me I have to bleed
to rid myself of all this pain
To just fly away
These thoughts and their siren's song
calling me to my destruction
whispering so seductively
I want to do as they say
I am their puppet they command me
I lift my sails and down comes the knife
a silver glint, then dulled with red
I make my own ocean, my own sea
Drowning in this crimson sea
The flood continues, I hear their song
I sail into the rocks, my ship breaking down
my fate is sealed with their song
then their song is no more, my thoughts are no more
Copyright ©
Destiny
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2004-07-05 12:23:26]
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Re: Suicides Siren
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by pixie on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:26:46 PM AEST
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very dark write, powerful
pixie xx |
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Re: Suicides Siren
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 01:12:23 PM AEST
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it's clear the destruction inside you is inmense.
very good poem , how ever. |
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Re: Suicides Siren
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by clowns_can_burn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:49:34 AM AEST
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nice, i like it alot.
Amanda |
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