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I'll Show You
Contributed by
MisterRight
on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The other night you asked me to show you
Oh, how I try to every day
From where you have me, it can稚 be done
But give us one chance and I値l lead the way
I値l show you the one who will never change
I値l show you a heart forever honest and true
I値l show you the love you致e always desired
I値l show you a world that revolves around you
I値l show you things you致e never dreamed
I値l show you happiness you致e never planned
I値l show you commitment with no reason to doubt
I値l show you true love if you値l take my hand
Copyright ﾂｩ
MisterRight
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2002-10-23 12:15:00]
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Re: I'll Show You
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:27:32 PM AEST
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But first she has to take your hand... isn't that the way of life??? Wishin' ya the best of luck (with my horrible Southern twang... lol)... hope she reads this 'ne.
Ginnie |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:31:07 PM AEST
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| Ok stop I really had enough! these poems are really getting to me! She really needs to read these poems of yours! I will have to say,she inspires you to write great poetry!Bravo again! Christina |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:26:36 PM AEST
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Hey, Dolphin... SHOW HER...SHOW HER, man... I'm sure after she sees it, she'll relent... :>)
Seriously, I wish you all the best!! You seem to be between the devil and the dark blue sea....
Hugs,
An old mermaid....
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Re: I'll Show You
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by viola on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 11:04:59 PM AEST
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| I understand it can be hard to show people but cliches say "sink or swim". Good luck to you. |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by spaceotter on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 07:25:45 AM AEST
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| Good write! Love does change in time, but if she likes what she sees, the root of that love won't ever go away. |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by unpredictable on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:19:00 AM AEST
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| awsome writing, i love all of your poems, wish you the best of luck. . . |
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Re: I'll Show You
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by OreO on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:50:33 PM AEST
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If you've shown her everything
that you can, then i would have
to question who is blind.
Great write, i enjoyed
reading this
.::ｴｯ`ｷ..ｷ OreOｷ..ｷｴｯ`::. |
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