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Taste my steel
Contributed by
dreaded_Axe_of_gore
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:36:09 PM in AEST
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I crave your blood and sweat
On the tip of my sword
As I caress your face you beg for mercy and forgiveness
This only fuels me for the fatal blow
Ill make sure you suffer
In lives beyond
This is what happens to those who mess with me
You have brought this upon your self
They wont ever trace it back to me
I sit back and laugh because its my turn to use you
Your last words are meaningless
I have turned everyone against you
They applaud my actions
I have been waiting for this moment for such a long time
And now that its finally here im going to enjoy every bit of it
Binded by me
Blinded by me
So mote it be!
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Re: Taste my steel
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by evilfairy on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:40:44 PM AEST
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| Scary but fascinating!! |
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Re: Taste my steel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:55:02 PM AEST
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| this is great, one side note, next time don't just use sword, to vage, use the name a spacifit type of sword, it sownds more poetic and is much more vivid. |
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Re: Taste my steel
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:36:15 AM AEST
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execellent poem.
creepy.i like it. |
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Re: Taste my steel
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by pixie on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:46:40 AM AEST
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wow, great poem,
pixie xx |
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