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Implosion
Contributed by
Ell
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Beneath a clouded sky,
beneath a clouded moon,
beneath a clouded tree,
a clouded mind breathes out a cold heartless breath.
The world is spun
into a tight bun with tiny sparks of resistance
only to stiffen
into an even smaller existence.
The eerie clear air marks the atmosphere of a story worth telling;
the only kind of weather anyone describes.
Bothersome thoughts illuminate the bushes to her left
while clear warm thoughts of love penetrate her eyes from the right.
The clashes of the two spark an adrenaline explosion
and the product of the aftermath twists into a silhouette of a boy,
his cold chest burning for the slightest touch from her.
Copyright ©
Ell
... [
2004-07-04 23:05:29]
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Re: Implosion
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:21:45 PM AEST
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nicely written. beautiful show of emotion and effection.
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Re: Implosion
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by kojikeneda on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 08:33:44 PM AEST
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i can relate to this alot thank you
and keep up the nice work
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Re: Implosion
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:45:04 PM AEST
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very interesting...nice though very nice....
summer |
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