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HOW DARE YOU

Contributed by lovingcritters on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:01:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove







"HOW DARE YOU!!!"

I remember well, down by the Old Mill.
You left me with a bruised heart, loved you still.
Emotionally manipulated by your anger.
Handsome, confident, couldn't be surer.

Fifty years have passed, they're gone.
How dare you think my love for you lingers on!
How dare you play again with my heart.
Puppet on a string, played well my part!

Pulling my strings with your anger no longer works.
Emotionally unattached, not affected by your slimy smirks!
My antenna like heart, I knew you were mean!
Narcissistic King, I'm no longer your Queen.

True love is not a game to be played.
'Tis not a guessing game, like Charades.
Love involves people's hearts, feelings, their well-being.
A blending, A molding, A calming, A steady linking.

The Old Mill where once we met has been torn down.
It's stream has now dried, nothing left, not even your crown!
I shutter to think what might have been.....
Thanking you much for showing me what I suspected,
your unloving heart within.

I still love to dance at 67, with maturity now.
My heart read you right when you broke your vow.
Thanking my lucky stars and My Creator as well.
I could have tried dancing with you for a lifetime......
I bid you Farewell!!!

Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
July 4th, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A coward is incapable of exhibiting love;
it is the prerogative of the brave.
~Mahatma Gandhi~

"CloseCall Smiles~"




Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2004-07-04 23:01:42]
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Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:06:34 PM AEST
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wow! what a story connie!! the nerve of him! beautifully written poem and lovely picture:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:09:56 PM AEST
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I'm happy you stood up for yourself and decided to not be played anymore.You are worth much more than he ever could be.Hats off to you,
PumpkinPie


Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:10:38 PM AEST
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This is EXACTLY why I don't mind aging one lil bit..The wisdom that comes is a comfort to me..though Ive still so much to learn.My dad is 81 and he says hes learning STILL! I think thats the best thing about life..the lessons ;)

As always..your words are a pleasure to read connie

loved these lines:

"My antenna like heart, I knew you were mean!
Narcissistic King, I'm no longer your Queen."

Hugs
"whiskers"
:)


Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:12:39 PM AEST
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What a powerful piece. You have a great strength in you to stand for what you believed in and hold your ground. I admire you for that. What a jerk to treat you that way. Well it all came out wonderfully in words. :)


Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:12:03 AM AEST
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Well, what an ass!! You should have just kicked him and walked away. Good for you, Connie.

Love,
Rita


Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 01:11:10 AM AEST
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well written i am glad you took a stand...

Shari


Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:50:54 AM AEST
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wow, great write,.....I was wondering how you were, not seen your poems in awhile? *hugs you*

pixie xx


Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:00:53 AM AEST
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Bravo ConSue!

What a strong woman you are with wisdom firmly planted.

I like that about you...

Keep on writing!



Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:16:23 PM AEST
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Ahh Connie...you are not just a strong woman, you are a woman of strength!! Good for you grrl.....
Hope to talk to you soon....
Hugs and luv,
Jenni


Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:20:41 PM AEST
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tosha mom,
That's telling him!
I'm so proud to be your brat.
Reminds me of every male in my life 'cept my Tarzan. He called me today!!
Aanother masterpeice that will give many women a smile and priceless wisdom, also courage to say hell no!
luv, hugs, smiles, joy,
your brat, emy



Re: HOW DARE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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Now, I'm quite sure that God intended for me to read this today. I have known my share of cowards, that is for sure. Thank you for a strong and insightful write.
Stitch




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