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~Forever~
Contributed by
jackee_line
on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I'm with you,
nothing matters but to be with you
Forever.
To gaze into your loving eyes,
never want to look away, being mesmerized
Forever.
To kiss your sweet tasting lips
is my only true wish
Forever.
You and I, will freeze time together
Forever.
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2002-10-23 12:00:00]
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Re: ~Forever~
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:01:58 PM AEST
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That's the beauty of love, it makes time stand still...
Ginnie...
SIF~ Great write by the way!!! |
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Re: ~Forever~
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by zeppchic420 on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 02:03:18 AM AEST
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| Great write |
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Re: ~Forever~
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by AmazingKate on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 11:28:57 AM AEST
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How I truly understand what you're saying about just wanting to be with someone, that nothing else matters. Freezing time would be a wonderful solution. Very fine write!
Warm smiles,
Kate |
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Re: ~Forever~
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 06:28:55 AM AEST
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| very beautiful poem. |
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Re: ~Forever~
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by Ramfire on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 01:36:17 AM AEST
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What a great picture of wanting to be with the person you love. Can't think of anything better in this life. Good write.
Ramfire |
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Re: ~Forever~
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by Fwog on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 08:20:40 AM AEST
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This is so simple yet so exquisite,
What a wonderful write.
Thank you |
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