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Lonely Wanderer
Contributed by
blueheart
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:42:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Soundless slideshows in my mind,
Memories etched within my heart,
Barely crying but filled with fear,
Lonely wanderer soon departs.
Million miles away from home,
Anxious thoughts of the new place,
Friends, they travel on different tracks,
Comfort abandons me in this phase.
Foreign perception remains unsculpted,
Moving forward with an open mind,
Reality grows with each new day,
One step forward, my home's left behind.
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blueheart
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2004-07-04 22:42:04]
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:48:30 PM AEST
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I love my comfort zone too..yet to embark on a whole new path,new faces,new directions,unfamiliars...will be a huge reward.You will grow in so many wonderful ways..I wish you all the best,a safe trip and please take care.
Write as often as you can..would love to be updated as each new change and revealation takes place :)
btw...love the poem ;)
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:51:27 PM AEST
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oh! this is beautiful, hanna, vivid images and just perfection! im so excited for you too, please stay in touch!! big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:54:48 PM AEST
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All the best of luck to you! Here was a well-penned piece. Bravo!
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:49:23 PM AEST
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I remember just how nervous I was to leave home for college. I cannot even begin to imagine leaving my country. I hope you will be able to maintain contact with us and keep us apprised of your life. I wish you the very best and I send hugs to you.
Rita |
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by venkat on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:28:39 AM AEST
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| Hanna..this is beautiful..you have well depicted your feelings..venkat |
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by pixie on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:52:38 AM AEST
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Awwww you're leaving us? *sniffs loudly* please keep in touch, I shall give you my address if you'd like, or??
wonderful poem,...
pixie xx |
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by Kie on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:03:48 AM AEST
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I have always enjoyed getting the chance to read your poetry. You just write so well every time.
I hope the road ahead will be the greatest time of your life. I was homesick when I left home but the journey was worth it. I pray the same will go for you.
You will do great and excel, I have no doubt.
Can't wait to read your next one..
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 05:20:36 PM AEST
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Very well written....strong emotions abound....
I wish you all the best and lots of new friendships.....
Hugs
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Re: Lonely Wanderer
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:33:50 PM AEST
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Such a horrible empty hollow helpless feeling is known as "Homesickness!" Drs., will tell you it is high on the stress list!
What a marvelous way you have with words. And your timing is outstanding too!
Lovely, lovely poem......I can feel the creases in your heart blue heart..deep feelings that once I felt.....But hand in there this too will past.
Love
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