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After...
Contributed by
Rhea
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 07:58:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It rushes over me....
something never heard of.
It started with a push...
and ended with a shove.
The bruises will heal...
but they scars will stay,
you attempt to touch me...
and for once I have nothing to say.
Slap after slap,
and glance after glance...
I could have ran...
with chance after chance.
Is he to blame?
Or am I?
Should I have let him abuse me...?
and then have him leave me there to cry?
Tear after tear fell...
but did he care?
If he has feelings of regret,He won't share.
Copyright ©
Rhea
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2004-07-04 19:58:02]
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Re: After...
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by babygirl2004 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:14:39 PM AEST
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| i can relate to this poem because when i was younger i married the boy next door everyone thought he was perfect but he had that secerat side and to this day i wander if he ever felt sorry. your poem is touching and heartfelt i would like to read more |
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Re: After...
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:24:43 PM AEST
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so sad, well written, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: After...
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:37:00 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry. Best wishes to you. and good delievery on you words. God bess you. |
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Re: After...
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by pixie on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:57:59 AM AEST
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yes welcome *extends hand*
great poem, sad tho......
pixie xx |
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Re: After...
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by dreaded_Axe_of_gore on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 12:22:54 PM AEST
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| A pretty good poem, I think it really shows the truth about how some relationships can be. |
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