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What love should be
Contributed by
Snake
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:17:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Baby, this is for you,
hoping you'll understand
that I don't always say what I feel,
but, it does flow from my hand
I hope that you still know
how I feel about you
for I would hate to think
that I'd have to live without you
I love it when you touch me,
even if it's only a brush
I love when you kiss me
it gives me such a rush
Every time you leave me,
I'm always in dispare,
but at the same time, happiness,
for, the next day I'll see you somewhere
I love the way you look at me,
always, an amazed expression
I love the way you fret about
my not making a decision
I always look forward to seeing you again
and listening to your laugh
hearing your jokes about people
and making fun of staff (or officers)
even, as it seems, the simple things
are what thrill me most,
for no one has ever given that to me,
I've n'ver had someone to boast
I hope that this doesn't frighten you
or freak you out in many ways
for this, truly came from the heart,
written in suspened daze
Always and Forever,
my heart belongs to you
and much like your Evenstar,
mine always holds true,
I know this may seem corny to you,
it sure as hell does to me,
all I know is that I love you,
afterall, isn't that what love should be?
Copyright ©
Snake
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2004-07-04 15:17:29]
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Re: What love should be
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by Brians_Sweety on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:23:00 PM AEST
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OH my goodness that is soo awesome!! That is a great poem. You helped me so much right now. My boyfriend just told me something and its not good but think you for sharing that poem it reminds me why I love him so much no matter what he does. Oh and he didn't cheat on me thats not it lol. Thank you sooo much for sharing!!
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Re: What love should be
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 04:02:09 PM AEST
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awww, sweet:) warm welcome to ypdc too,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: What love should be
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by Cherriesbroken725 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 05:08:57 PM AEST
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| this is a good peom keep it up i hope the person u wrote it for does understand u |
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Re: What love should be
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:07:38 PM AEST
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omg i'm speechless this was totally awesome, beautiful write. loved it
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