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Don´t cry,butterfly Neplač, motýlku
Contributed by
Aika
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:09:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Don´t cry, butterfly,
Your tears are burning,
Burning, where they fall
Don´t cry, butterfly,
Your flowers are today withering,
Whitering under your legs,
Don´t cry butterfly,
You will be hungry today,
You will be alone
Don´t cry butterfly,
Your sun is freezing today,
Your wings will freeze
Don´t cry, butterfly,
There´s darkness around today,
You won´t, won´t see
Don´t cry, butterfly,
You destroy yourself,
Yourself only
No, cry it out,
Cry it out,
Tomorrow will nicer be
Neplač, motýlku,
Tvé slzy pálí.
Hoří, kde dopadnou
Neplač, motýlku,
Tvé květiny dnes vadnou
Vadnou ti pod nohama
Neplač, motýlku,
Dnes budeš hladov,
Budeš sám
Neplač, motýlku,
Tvé slunce dnes mrazí
Křídla ti zmrznou
Neplač, motýlku,
Dnes je kol tebe tma,
Nic, nic neuvidíš
Neplač, motýlku,
Sám sebe jen,
Sebe zničíš
Ne, vyplač se,
Vyplač,
Zítra bude ti líp
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-07-04 15:09:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Don´t cry,butterfly Neplač, motýlku
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:23:39 PM AEST (User
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you are right tomorrow will be nicer let the tears cleanse
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Re: Don´t cry,butterfly Neplač, motýlku
(User Rating: 1 ) by Brians_Sweety on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:32:05 PM AEST (User
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That was a great write! I just like the way you organized it. I also like you translation. By the way what language is that?? lol I'm blonde:D
Stephanie
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Re: Don´t cry,butterfly Neplač, motýlku
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:36:47 PM AEST (User
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poor lill butterfly, awww, such a beautiful vivid poem alena, with hope in tomorrow:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Don´t cry,butterfly Neplač, motýlku
(User Rating: 1 ) by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 08:20:44 PM AEST (User
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wow...this is such a short yet beautiful poem...i love how you then go to anthor language...is it the same poem or is there lines added? and what language is it?...very interesting poem
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Re: Don´t cry,butterfly Neplač, motýlku
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:14:03 AM AEST (User
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Oh Aika........I adore butterflys and to see one cry would break my heart! This is so vivid in my mind's eye! It's love, Aika, just like your other lovely poems.......tomorrow will be nicer......what a nice way to end this lovely tale!
Wonderful
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Re: Don´t cry,butterfly Neplač, motýlku
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:36:00 AM AEST (User
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I've said this before and will say it again.You inspired me to write, you continue to inspire me and I'm glad to be able to share your work
steve |
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