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Now You See

Contributed by adamsbabygurlie on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

once you look into my eyes
you will see
how much you hurt me
with all your lies

you made me feel
like i was the only one
but now i am done
with this ***** deal

you used me for my body boy
made me feel like *****
but this is it
you are the one who is a toy

that I'm about to break
with all your lies
could you hear my cries
but why does my heart still ache

my feeling I hide
I can't show people the real me
why can't you see
i still cried

tears of being sad
I know I need to be strong
but you were the one who was wrong
I am so mad

you looked at me
thought I was some kind of trick
but you're the one with a small ****
now you can finally see

how much you hurt me
with all your lies
i can still hear all my cries
now you see

Copyright © adamsbabygurlie ... [ 2004-07-04 13:43:19]
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Re: Now You See (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:46:05 PM AEST
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awww you poor thing this guy must have hurt you really bad........ foget about him , what happened is in the past, move on sweetie and try and be happy... he is the loser, not you

great write,

pixie xx

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