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Sultry and Smoldering
Contributed by
brigitte7735
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:30:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sultry seduces and sweetly induceS
Unison's debut as untruths bid adieU
Lost in love's enthrall, you're too laced to recalL
Time becomes stagnant for this charmed imaginanT
Rawness remember, written in scorched embeR
Yearned for chemistry, Smoldering and SultrY
Aurora persona that arose in VeronA
Notice his conversion with lust's immersioN
Daringly defied and destiny complieD
Smoldering ignites and Sultry sets her sightS
Mistress of the storm, she sashays shapely forM
Obession bestow when Capricorn met LeO
Literary thrill, flushed heart shan't be stilL
Drink lifeblood unfazed, daggered hearts are emblazeD
Earned karma's bounty as creation's decreE
Rain will not sever, these flames burn foreveR
Inside thunder's cry, electric alibI
Nuptial's embolden, two hearts now beholdeN
Given the soldering of Sultry and SmolderinG
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:34:58 PM AEST
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wow, this was very clever, I liked this alot...
pixie xx |
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by reilt on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 02:40:45 PM AEST
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| bravo...very clever...brilliantly written. i loved it. |
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:43:55 PM AEST
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very interesting, creative and clever:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:53:09 PM AEST
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I can see why Dan loves you. What a fascinating write.
Stitch |
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:40:27 PM AEST
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This was pretty cool Vanessa.
Sultry and Smoldering huh?
Gonna guess you are Sultry? :P
This was very inventive and I know I couldn't get away with trying a regular acrostic. Heh.
With those names though I was thinking this would be a sizzling poem as in... More... Yeah, you know what I mean. :P |
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:22:11 AM AEST
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Oh my what another astonishing write,
I love the imagery within your reflections they give a gentle aptness that is so hard to accomplish and you have done with ease.
I love the structure and style as any person with an eye for artistic talent would, hell any person with an eye for anything could see this write is far beyond the meagre attempts at poetry that one sees so much these days, (not on this site but one i was on.. seemed more making fun of people with a poetic soul)
Might i just lay a comment on one section i felt bought the whole piece together for myself, it might be different for other but for me, this gave the write meaning
'Time becomes stagnant for this charmed imaginant
Rawness remember, written in scorched ember
Yearned for chemistry, Smoldering and Sultry'
I dont know why i feel like that about this part, it just well, 'does it for me lol'
Thankyou so much for sharing this, i look forward to the next piece
Luke
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:17:37 PM AEST
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terrific- you do such a great job staying true to your format and still succeeding in a meaningful write. Whenever I try this, I am stilted and queer, well, most of the time I am stilted and queer, but especially when I am trying to do two things at once.
nice job. |
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Re: Sultry and Smoldering
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:28:16 AM AEST
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Such a good write that I feel somehow lacking in the ideal comment to put to it on here.
So I guess I will just say that I was glad to have the opportunity to read it and hope that sentiment is ok
Steve |
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