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sympathy for the devil....
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:12:56 PM in AEST
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sympathy for the devil....
forgotton...
banished to the shadows
lingering on with the other haunted souls
we can see him at times
a glimps of a cold buring tear
running down his deformed hagard cheek
but we tend to pray to the lord
the light to guide us on our way
but never to the devil
the darkness that loses us
and currupts us
we never cease to damn him
i think hes bored and tired
cant we pity for one little second
he cannot be that evil
to send one thought down to that dark and drank place
to brighten it up for just a second
can the lord hate that so much?
that we pity the damned?
his face cold and tense
suffed all those lives wasted down in that hell pit
cant he see one flower
a rose...
it may be crumpled when he turns to look
but if he sees a picture
to remind him of the beauty
maybe just maybe he might forget that he is the devil
and hate his deads...
maybe he will see the light just for one minute in his life of pain
and smile one last time gracefully?
have sympathy for him
he was,and still part,human...
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Re: sympathy for the devil....
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by hannahbanana on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:14:05 PM AEST
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| excellent write. well done. |
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Re: sympathy for the devil....
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by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:33:36 PM AEST
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great write, great flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: sympathy for the devil....
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by kammie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 02:01:35 PM AEST
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hiya hannah
your poems boss!! why shouldnt we sypathise
yes you do know who mines about your really understanding thanks !!! and yes his name is martin and yes i do love him but dont tell anyone this lol!!
thanks for always being there your a true mate see you tomorrow in school bye !!
lv kammie xx |
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Re: sympathy for the devil....
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by kammie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 02:03:27 PM AEST
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sorry but i forgot to say that hannahs me best mate !!
han if anyfins eva rong tel me !!
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Re: sympathy for the devil....
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 02:08:29 PM AEST
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aw becky thanks alot hun luv u!
me bezzie m8 too!
ur poems r gr8 an thanks for bein there for me
if ne thin is eva wrong we can always tell eachother,thanks alot hun xxx
luv ya see ya tomora xx luv han |
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