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thanks for those moments
Contributed by
kammie
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:06:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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it may not look
but it is inside
it takes everything
ive got to hide
the feelings i have for you
you catch my stare
just for that moment
i am your special chosen one
all my emotions
i vent through you
through stares and looks
and your touch
when you turn away
my world breaks again
after our frozen moment
my world shatters again
a break from reallity is all it takes
to set my heart at a race
my cheeks flushed my eys sparkling
but in return a formal politeness
but thanks for those moments
i feel special
thanks for the feeling of love
thanks for your stare tells
if i ever need youll be there
but as a friend
thats all
Copyright ©
kammie
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2004-07-04 13:06:41]
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Re: thanks for those moments
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by hannahbanana on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:12:50 PM AEST
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| lovely...very well written. |
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Re: thanks for those moments
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:15:47 PM AEST
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aw its really beautiful
i think everyone in the world can relate to this
we have them for a moment
and maybe as a friend
but you always want them as more...
aw thanks it reminded me of some of my relationships
luv han x |
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