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Inner beauty rules!
Contributed by
backstreetdreamer
on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:54:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hold out your hand,
to the poor and the weak
give them the comfort
and solace they seek.
Give from the heart,
to the young and the old
give them a part
of your innermost gold.
Open your door,
to the lonely and ill
feed them and warm them
with grace and goodwill.
Put yourself in their shoes,
realise how it feels
in your innermost heart,
your soul-bells will peal.
The help you are giving,
to others in need
will come back to feed you,
a blessing indeed!
Copyright ©
backstreetdreamer
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2004-07-04 11:54:56]
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Re: Inner beauty rules!
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 12:13:34 PM AEST
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| i love the nature of this poem. i love the way you structured this and the way it flows |
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Re: Inner beauty rules!
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 03:36:50 PM AEST
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very good indeed...i liked this write a lot
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Re: Inner beauty rules!
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 05:34:29 PM AEST
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Upbeat, inspirational, truthful and brought a smile to me this evening.
It is true that being a giver is the greatest blessing imaginable. It just keeps coming back to you so many times over that I find it amazing.
We are all human and sometimes we are the strength lender and sometimes we are the one who needs another to lean on. I love the way you wrote about the inner person in this poem.
Thank you for a great reminder.
Well done again!
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Re: Inner beauty rules!
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:03:10 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write with a great message. |
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Re: Inner beauty rules!
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:11:04 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Inner beauty rules!
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:12:45 AM AEST
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Not only a great message here, but the R&R was perfect!
Very well done
Barkeep, a drink for my friend
Larry |
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