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Someone Who Cares
Contributed by
MusicGurl3291
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Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:08:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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When she was 2, her father died,
From there on out her life would be one scary ride.
Her mother worked night and day,
She didn’t see her until the suns rays.
Shed change her cloths and stay for 10,
This poor young heart she thought she could mend.
She thought she could mend, the pain, the broken pieces,
But for 10 minutes a day it wasn’t worth the try.
!5 years later her mother had died,
Over worked and overwhelmed, from this scary ride.
At 17 she graduated high school,
And on this night a tragedy began.
She took a walk, shedding a tear,
With no other feeling but 1, fear.
She was trying to find reasons to live,
She came up with 1, to listen to people lie and fib.
She stepped up on the bridge,
With no good reasons to live.
Just as she was ready to go...
She heard a voice quickly say "no!"
She turned around with tears in her eyes,
This voice of a young man said, " No reason to say your goodbyes."
"Yes there is! nobody cares!"
"If no one cared then I wouldn’t be here."
She turned around to meet his face,
Soon enough she was held in him warm embrace.
This young girls heart was finally mended,
This tragedy began, but never ended.
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2004-07-04 09:08:51]
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Re: Someone Who Cares
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by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:15:47 AM AEST
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awww this is a very sad poem, *hugs you*
pixie xx |
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Re: Someone Who Cares
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 12:17:46 PM AEST
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great stuff. i'm glad the girl in this had a happy ending. she defently deserved it!
i like your style of poetry. i'll look out for more of yours. |
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