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°°°Can You Walk Away°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 10:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Can you walk away
Without taking a look back
Tell me what was missing
What was it that i lacked
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Not every soul is fortunate
To feel a love so deep
Your my everything i love
Your love i'll always keep
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Nothing in this world
Could ever replace
The memories we share
Even time cannot erase
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Our love is not a river
It has no boundaries
Swimming in true loves ocean
Together for eternity
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I was cast from heaven
Put back into my hell
Blinded by my true love
Forever under his spell
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There's nothing else my love can do
You already know, i'd die for you
And even though we are apart
You are the keeper of my heart
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In the echoes of the night
I hear you breathing next to me
Everything here feels so right
I wish you could see how it should be
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People say so many fake things
Time passes on, they lose their dreams
They say time will heal a broken heart
But they never know, just where to start
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You can push me away to the pits of hell
But you are where my heart will dwell
Don't be filled with hate, i love you so
I am your soul mate, this you know
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I wish your love had not given up on me
I'd give my life, to make you happy
You asked to be free, and this i gave
But know i'll love you, till my dying grave
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-10-23 10:15:00]
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 10:39:35 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, deep and touching. I know it really had an effect on me. I couldn't tear my eyes away. I love the line "You are the keeper of my heart". Awesome poem!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 10:47:02 AM AEST
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| Welcome to our site, this is a wonderful write, hopes he knows how much you love him, |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:24:56 PM AEST
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| Welcome! This is really a good poem! Can't wait to read more! Christina |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 04:35:48 PM AEST
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Breathtakingly beautiful, but how deep the cut?
Please keep writing and welcome. |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by princesspurty on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:38:46 AM AEST
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| beautiful! very nice, welcome! |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by rbps861 on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 12:32:04 PM AEST
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| very good job ! |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 12:12:53 AM AEST
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| Another beautiful write. Yes some people are blessed indeed to have someone love them like you do this person. I hope he will relize it and cherish you forever. Yellowrose |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 02:54:37 PM AEST
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| Wow...I really really really enjoyed this one. It's so beautiful and it all just runs perfectly in sync with how I feel. We do that to each other alot don't we? We mirror each other sometimes...I've noticed that. I think it's cool. Anyways always write and i'll always read |
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Re: °°°Can You Walk Away°°°
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by nomad on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:47:25 AM AEST
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| Oh, OreO, the sadness, the grief, tears my heart. A beautiful write. I pray you find love that never walks away from you. The fool who did must have been crazy. |
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