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Contributed by
valek
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:42:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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don't be scared of me
don't be scared of this feeling
that you get when you hold me close
within all the time we're killing
don't freak out because your not sure
exactly what your heart is doing
just be thankful for what we have now
and the fact that we have it somehow
i just want to hold you near
until all of your fear will just disappear
and take you to a place in which you've never been
i just need you to put your trust within
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valek
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2004-07-03 18:42:00]
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Re: within
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:48:02 PM AEST
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Comforting words.
"just be thankful for what we have now
and the fact that we have it somehow"
Wise!!
LW
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Re: within
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by DragonLuvSong on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:48:14 PM AEST
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| to be completely honest i liked the other 2 better...but this one is filled with devotion and love also, and really, that is all that matters. |
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Re: within
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:48:01 PM AEST
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Very sweet. I like bbecause it's gentle.
J~ |
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