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Nothing Screws Up Again
Contributed by
DragonLuvSong
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:40:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am not worth anything!
Why was I born?
I was born to be condemned for suffering an existence of stupidity and unhappiness.
No one loves me!
Why do I leave my sanctuary?
I leave my sanctuary because I want to try to fight my destiny.
No one needs me!
Why do I bother to try?
I bother to try because I hope someone will love me.
I should die!
Why haven't I given up trying?
I haven't given up trying because I cannot let them win.
My destiny is to live unfulfilled and unsuccessful!
Why don't I just give up?
I don't give up because I cannot die now.
I wish for love!
I wish for happiness!
I wish for success!
I wish I didn't screw up...
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DragonLuvSong
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2004-07-03 18:40:34]
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Re: Nothing Screws Up Again
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 07:01:13 PM AEST
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As hopeless as you feel things may seem for you,underneath all these words I see strength and WILLINGNESS"
To be willing is a wonderful thing :)
LW |
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Re: Nothing Screws Up Again
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:31:59 PM AEST
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| that was a great poem, i liked how you would follow the negative questions with a postive answer, awesome job |
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Re: Nothing Screws Up Again
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:51:26 PM AEST
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You may have questions...but you also hold the answers. They're there. Trust yourself.
J~ |
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Re: Nothing Screws Up Again
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by pixie on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 06:38:06 AM AEST
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very good write,
pixie xx |
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