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hopefully
Contributed by
valek
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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touching your body is better
than i ever thought it could be
and when i wake up from long days
you'll be there next to me, hopefully
wet flesh makes instant contact
your body feels it but your lips cant say it
put a trust in me you've never shown
and i promise you we can make it
dont be scared of this gentle touch
dont be frightened if i get a little rough
its just the feeling that i get from seeing you
and how i want to have you so much
Copyright ©
valek
... [
2004-07-03 18:31:41]
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Re: hopefully
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:44:54 PM AEST
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Cant quite work out with your writing what it is that pulls me in:)
Maybe its the honesty,raw feelings?
Whatever it is..I love it!!
LW |
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Re: hopefully
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by DragonLuvSong on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:45:51 PM AEST
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| this is bursting with love...that sounds corny but I don't care. its just what you want to be written to you, whoever is on the recieving end of this is very lucky, i would love to hear it from someone, its so wonderful. |
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Re: hopefully
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by Sirena_Degana on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:56:48 PM AEST
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this is so sweet and tender....i love it!!!!!!
blessed be!!!
sirena |
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Re: hopefully
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 10:00:45 PM AEST
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This is very sweet. I truly liked this one.
J~ |
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