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Holy War (Pt.3)
Contributed by
DerPinguin44
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:49:32 PM in AEST
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(Curiously):Have I been Revealed the Light?
Noises so loud,
Up in the clouds,
What's wrong with the Angels?
Evil is stabbing backs,
And Micheal's fighting back,
Explain to me, Angels!
Why did we
get the Choice?
GOD! Can't you hear
My feeble voice?
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[Chorus]:
My Revelation,
I must scribe!
Let the universe know,
How many Angels died!
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What did this war do!
All the unholy never knew!
Seeing defeat at the end,
Seperated many friends!
And now that some,
Know the war's been WON!
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{Chorus}
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Shall I speak right now,
And shall I tell how,
Angels against Angels,
So many dead Angels.
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DerPinguin44
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2004-07-03 17:49:32]
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Re: Holy War (Pt.3)
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by UncleSpunky on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:17:03 PM AEST
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| If only we could hear u sing it too! Have you written the melody? |
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Re: Holy War (Pt.3)
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by DerPinguin44 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:32:18 PM AEST
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Sorry to say this, I'm not singing it.
I'm lead guitarist.
*coughs*But, if you do want me to sing it....
laa?!
AHEM. |
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Re: Holy War (Pt.3)
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 10:09:32 PM AEST
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| The composition of this is different from the first two. No repeats of verses. I like that its a good way to conclude things by making it different and fresh. It seems a lot sharper and would probally sound louder then the first two parts. Aww man your not gonna sing it lol. Im no singer either, but I did it twice...not so much singing but reading the lyrics with no melody and adding FX to em. They turned out ok. The songs were called "From the mouths of men to gods come forth" and "Samael the Twelve Winged Terror" both of em are posted on my Acid Planet page. Yeah both are about religion...half based on things I learned in Western Civ I...some based on the game Silent Hill...some based on research...some I made up. |
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Re: Holy War (Pt.3)
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by DerPinguin44 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:37:05 PM AEST
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I thank you for your comments. I am currently working on my vocals, you might be able to hear me do them.
-The Pinguin |
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Re: Holy War (Pt.3)
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by mdmorash on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:47:15 PM AEST
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| Well...that was brilliant. |
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