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my plate is full of (broken dishes)
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:34:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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my plate is full of
(broken dishes)
empty wishes
dreams that seem to scream
(it's not a dream)
i wake to Nothing
but i'm not alone
holes in the wall
(a broken home?)
i stare out
a room without
much of a view
all i see is a sea of people
staring right back at me
(the promised "forever"
is only as long
as it takes for the knife
to reach the heart)
your words are storm clouds
raining (your bull*****) down on me
my words are sharp debris
in the twister of your intellect
(never safe)
empty
our house (tomorrow)
our bed (tonight)
our hearts (forever)
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2004-07-03 17:34:14]
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Re: my plate is full of (broken dishes)
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:42:30 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE.. but a sad write. wow. how you express yourself. a great poet.... feel the pain and feel the emptyness. sandy |
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Re: my plate is full of (broken dishes)
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:45:14 PM AEST
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such a sad poem my friend. I'm really feeling for you as empty as that may sound its true. The poem all hit me hard I hope we can talk again soon.Hang in there buddy.
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Re: my plate is full of (broken dishes)
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by Merry on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:42:01 PM AEST
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this poem evokes restless anger that comes with the end of a relationship - nothing seems right or like it will ever feel right it again -
well done - great word play
merry |
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