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THE UNREAL PAIN OF REALITY.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:50:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I’m trying to do some thing,
Any thing! To keep me going.
To stop my thoughts from pacing,
So I can stop over flowing.
A whole week today,
Since I last cut!
I don’t wanna do it ever again,
But this addictions far too much.
It’s over coming me.
There’s not much I can do.
I don’t want to give in,
Receive those feelings of old and new.
I know I need to stop thinking about it!
But how do I?
Suggestions are welcome!
I week today, I might have died.
I have too much emotion!
‘Coz I’m a cursed little child.
I get nightmare, illusions.
And they flow quite wild!
It’s a week last night,
Since I had my last one.
I’m trying not to think,
Incase back they come!
But… how do I?
Suggestions are welcome.
Nothings alright
My eye lids are stapled shut!
I don’t want see things,
…but I still do.
I see me crying,
Alone on that roof!
I hear the wind howling,
And rustling in my ears.
I ran to the roof,
Chased by my fears.
I can still taste,
The salty rain on my tongue.
My life has been a waste.
No good comes out of being young.
I still feel tied down.
Just like those chained hand cuffs made me feel.
And I’ll always remember the pain in my wrists.
That pain was so unreal!
I can still hear the shouts,
Of those security men.
Those sounds won’t leave me,
They just come, again and again.
What am I meant to do?
How am I meant to forget?
When one of those guards spoke to me.
The fact that I let him, i'll always regret.
He showed me the scars on his arms,
From when he’d self-harmed.
And he said that he understood me!
The one person in my life,
That can relate.
And in an instant gone.
The one I'll never hate.
But he just closed the gate.
Walked away.
Never for me,
To see again!
While I was dragged,
On forth by the police.
They didn’t care!
That they made my arms bleed…
But that security guard,
Touched my heart.
And I bleed for him,
Because he brought on the dark.
He made my thoughts rise up,
And become more of what they are.
He wouldn’t let me jump!
He said “it’s no way to join the stars”…
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deathdrop
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2004-07-03 15:50:34]
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Re: THE UNREAL PAIN OF REALITY.
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:00:19 PM AEST
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this is really strange true and beautiful
from the inner core of the mind
its presented a life story in just a poem
and i can relate to it even though your gonna hate me for saying that!
carry on writing and your poetry will carry on way after you do....talented
thanks
x luv han |
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Re: THE UNREAL PAIN OF REALITY.
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by Monkeybones99 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:01:58 PM AEST
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| I want to say I really enjoy your poetry because it makes me feel I feel the pain in these words you write and I hope you find yourself letting go of a little bit of it as you write keep up the great work. |
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Re: THE UNREAL PAIN OF REALITY.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:05:11 PM AEST
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awww, rosie, im here if you want to talk to someone, i think this is so well written knowing how upset you were when writing it, too! what that man said to you was beautiful, “it’s no way to join the stars”… i guess in life we never know if what we say is heard, or what we hear sinks in, but im glad you let that be a part of your heart, thanx so much for sharing, i hope you feel happier soon:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: THE UNREAL PAIN OF REALITY.
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by Brians_Sweety on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:14:14 PM AEST
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I just want to let you know I love you.
I don't know you and I know you are thinking how do you love me.
I'm Stephanie Adams and I am a missionary,I'm very sorry you went through these things! If there is anyway I could help you just let me know and with God's help I will help you through anything. It says in the Bible I can do all things through Christ which strenghtens me Phill. 4:13 So through Christ you can get through all of you pain I promise. Although I can't say I know where you are coming from I do know some people who do and can help you so if you do really need help just private message me and I will help!!!
In God's Love,
Stephanie Adams |
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