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Dashed
Contributed by
olivetreedove
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:28:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It was late,
It was dark,
Rain fell.
A night of happiness,
Both drink and drug-induced.
We sped on,
Unaware of what lied ahead.
A fallen tree branch
In front of us,
Blocking our way.
Blinded by headlights,
We swerved.
Immense pain,
Pain beyond all that could be known.
Hopes and dreams dashed
In a moment of recklessness.
In mere seconds,
A life, no,
More than just one life
Taken away.
Our familes live without us now,
All because of one careless decision.
Copyright ©
olivetreedove
... [
2004-07-03 15:28:45]
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Re: Dashed
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:31:30 PM AEST
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| i liked this poem.ou give off a great message of what drinking and drugs can do, especially when you drive, great job. |
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Re: Dashed
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:13:01 PM AEST
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its really sad and dark
and shows (like breathless sed) the use of drink driving is dangerous
but the way you expressed the lives of both taken was very gd
and ill think twice lol
thanks
x han |
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Re: Dashed
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by Brians_Sweety on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:23:48 PM AEST
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your poem is awesome. It hit me right where it counts. I think you for sharing. I share you same feeling I hate drugs and drinking although I have drank but never done drugs. all I can say is thank you and AWESOME write!!
Stephanie |
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