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running
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:21:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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im running away from the murder
killing this life to get away
to run is pain
but to fall would be worse
dead and still
my head bages against this space
and it bleeds inside to escape
but i know deep inside
i must sacrifice my mind
to live in my spirit
guiding to the edge of the world
to hide and shut out from existance
i must reveal as little as i can to the truth
the clock ticks in my mind
and i can hear 'its' breathe coming closer
searching for my mouth
to suck all my soul from underneath my nose
i close my eyes and wish with all whats left of my heart that you will walk past
and you sweep past just one last time...
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-07-03 15:21:24]
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Re: running
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:36:27 PM AEST
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very interesting and rather creepy. i like the depth of this poem. kinda makes you think. nicely written. i liked this. well done.
5 stars.
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Re: running
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:20:41 PM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: running
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 04:53:12 PM AEST
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| This is a painful but excellent write. Good job! |
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