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Waiting for a Miracle
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:50:59 PM in AEST
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As I walk through streets
of crowded people,
they look at the pieces of me.
Laughing and pointing,
whispering at a bloody life
hanging by a thin thread.
Threatening to break.
As I stand here waiting
for a miracle
to save me,
to set a pace for me.
I turn around
to face myself in the mirror.
I run my hands
along my face
wondering how I turned
so far upside down.
Fixing the problem
is so far from reality.
As I stand here waiting
for a miracle
to save me,
to set a pace for me.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
... [
2004-07-03 13:50:59]
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 02:40:36 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this myself! Very good jobt! Give yourself more credit! |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:56:41 AM AEST
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Your right these lyrics are TERRIBLE!
(only joking)
PFR |
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Re: Waiting for a Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:49:43 AM AEST
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You've prejudiced my opinion with your intro. If you'd simply left it blank, I'd not take into consideration the fact that
a) You may be lacking in self-esteem
b) You actually believe that this is dire
c) You believe that you can do better.
I'm inclined to agree with you now, simply because I don't understand what its worth, or what it's about.
Keep writing. |
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