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Missing you................
Contributed by
Puppy
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:01:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I cried and cried when you were gone
But i didn't cry for long
Because i knew it wouldn't bring you back
I stare at the picture of you day by day
As on my bed i lay
I wish you were with me.............
Copyright ©
Puppy
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2004-07-03 13:01:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Missing you................
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:27:44 PM AEST (User
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awww... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Missing you................
(User Rating: 1 ) by UncleSpunky on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 02:03:50 PM AEST (User
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i need to know more, how does this end? |
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Re: Missing you................
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 02:20:36 PM AEST (User
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good poem
feel the longing there
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Re: Missing you................
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 04:35:06 AM AEST (User
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Excellent, some people say good poetry is about capturing a moment, you've certainly done that here.
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Re: Missing you................
(User Rating: 1 ) by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:30:10 AM AEST (User
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Nice little poem conveying your feelings very well. Its nice to see you are venturing out from your limerick & trying something new. I thought this was a good write, im looking forward to more from you.
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