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the love up above
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:17:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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everyday seems so beautiful with you
everynight is so warm even though its cold outside
underneath the skin all i can see if love for me
im not vain but i can see it like broad day light
and im loving every moment with you
the touch of your hand
and when you stroke my face
my heart lightens
and im beginning to believe
heaven really is on earth
if its here along side with you
i dont want to die ever
i want to live an eternity with you
hand and hand guide me throughout the times
the life
the world
the love up above
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
... [
2004-07-03 12:17:22]
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Re: the love up above
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:24:54 PM AEST
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i like to comment on my own poems i know it sounds sad but hey!lol
feel free to show your thoughts comments welcome and ready!lol
this is about love and trust and guding....they key ingredients for a relationship...
ba bye huns xxx han |
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Re: the love up above
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:42:07 PM AEST
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very beautiful poem Hanna......
hold onto this feeling,
pixie xx |
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Re: the love up above
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by UncleSpunky on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:57:25 PM AEST
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I read about poetry
words about thoughts on words
and wrote a poem about it
words about thoughts on words about thoughts on words
when I realised the feedback loop futility
thoughts on words about thoughts on words about thoughts on words
and wrote another poem, about that
words about
thoughts
on words about
thoughts
on
words about
thoughts
on words
A little beyond saccharine for me! |
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