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On Your Own
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
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Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 10:07:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Stepping forth on this journey of mine,
I leave only you, crying behind.
In the darkness you wallow,
In the unfinished suffering,
Tempting hate, with questions
You automatically bring.
Blame is on the one who
thinks he’s been stung,
I tell you this,
I hold the wound when you backstabbed me,
And then it begun.
I laugh at it now, your nothing but a memory
Hidden inside a fear.
A fear that’s trickled away from realty
Wasted on tears.
You’ve transformed into a stranger,
I find you now filling the void,
Using such poor judgment
How can you love her?
I still care that’s why I warn you,
She doesn’t see all the beauty you present,
Your going to end up vacant,
The person I knew is gone now, I walk away
And leave you to battle your own way.
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Re: On Your Own
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:39:59 PM AEST
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| wow great job! i enjoyed it. =) |
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Re: On Your Own
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:01:09 PM AEST
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An incredibly strong write.
Sometimes the walking away can do some good :)
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Re: On Your Own
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:36:03 PM AEST
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It is very sad to watch someone going down because they are not taking advantage of their full potential and associating with others that do not see it or help them reach it.
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