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begging
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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these scars are begging to be split open
this face is begging to be bruised
these words are begging to hurt me
this heart is bleeding for you
this bodies begging to abused
these lips are begging to be sealed shut
these hands are begging to be held down
helpless torn
a life without a cause
all this pain i thought was gone comes back
and tears this skin so its look so ugly
no one can bare to look
no one can bare to think about this pain
no one will help
when i,m drowning in my own blood
no one will come
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Re: begging
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathdrop on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:50:59 AM AEST (User
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i'll be here if you like.
sure, you can only write to you by e-mail but sometimes its good to have a good vent.
i won't judge you. i'm just here if you ever want to talk. OK? |
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Re: begging
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 10:09:11 AM AEST (User
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A very strong and dramatic poem. well written grip.
Kimberly |
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