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TIME
Contributed by
tangle
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:03:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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people come and go
they hide their feelings
that always show
unaware of potential they possess
don't make life such a mess!
stranger with a stare
sits to watch the morning air
naive to consequences and resentment
time is no commentment
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tangle
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2004-07-03 03:03:29]
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Re: TIME
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by spooky on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:17:16 AM AEST
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| I agree,,well written ,,a friend in words spooky |
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Re: TIME
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by oldernotwiser on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:31:13 AM AEST
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| I have a friend who's a Baptist minister who always tells me "don't kill the dragon." She tells me this every time I say my life is a mess. (often) Apparently there is a dragon of chaos (I forget her name) in some other culture whose arrival signifies great changes taking place in one's life. She says that we Westerners are so programmed to slay all our dragons that we often miss the changes that are supposed to be taking place in us spiritually because we can't stand the chaos. Now I am preaching to myself here because I can't stand it either. But I heard her words in my head the minute I read that line in your poem. Anyway -- here's to all of us shuddering beneath the dragon's breath. |
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