|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Molotov Cocktails
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:45:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
|
Explosions in my face and in my ears
Reality is incinerated
As my thoughts suddenly don't mean a thing
And everyone elses try and shape me
People trying to pick a rose for me
But to pick a rose you must plant the seed
Explosions in my heart and in my mind
Everything now is un-situated
Clarity for me is, oh, so easy
But you all still seem to doubt what I say
Whenever I say no seeds are blooming
'Cause for seeds to bloom it takes more than one
Explosions are here, proportion is gone
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
... [
2004-07-03 01:45:07] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Molotov Cocktails
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:53:58 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is an interesting poem. i enjoyed reading it. though was not quite sure what message i got from it. but i understood it and felt like it was happening to me. well done
love and hugs
gen xx |
|
|
Re: Molotov Cocktails
(User Rating: 1 ) by kyletycz on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:22:09 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very interesting poem, i thought it was a bit confusing at parts, but it held a feeling to it
l8r
Ninja Tycz |
|
|
|