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Perfectly Fake
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:55:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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A candy coated life,
with painted lips,
and sweet smelling perfume.
A gingerbread house
and a smile of gold.
Night dawns,
and evil comes out to play.
The scream of terror
rings throughout the night.
A candy coated life
now painted red.
A gaping hole
in this twisted existence
we call life.
No painted lips,
no sweet perfume.
But the gingerbread house
still stands;
hinting that everything is ok.
A perfectly fake bright shadow
of a girl.
A girl holding her head down
staring at the ground.
With a smile of gold.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
... [
2004-07-02 23:55:55]
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Re: Perfectly Fake
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by bj111 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:23:20 AM AEST
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| Quite liked this. Moody. Well done...bob |
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Re: Perfectly Fake
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:29:01 AM AEST
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very hard hitting,
pixie xx |
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Re: Perfectly Fake
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by blackmarker on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:13:15 AM AEST
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| Awesome. I love it! |
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