|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
i only matter to you when everything else falls through
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:24:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
just leave me while things are good for you
ignore my pain and all of my tears
but do not worry
i WILL be there for you
because even if you dont love me
i love you
Copyright ©
deadbloodyrose
... [
2004-07-02 23:24:33]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: i only matter to you when everything else falls through
(User Rating: 1 )
by PieceOfABrokenSoul on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:55:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Eh, an okay poem. Needs a little more rhyming but still good. I feel the same for a girl who now hates me, named Jackie. |
|
|
Re: i only matter to you when everything else falls through
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:21:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i for one feel that was a very good poem ,short and sweet.an excellent write
~vermillion~ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
