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Stuck in Your Illusion
Contributed by
Jacquelynne
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:34:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Where were you when I needed you?
Stuck in your illusion,
dreaming of your perception of me,
of false perfection
that isn't real?
That isn't me
but that's all you see
and looks are decieving
I wish I had your flaws-
to make for myself
an emotionless void
I could call life
just as you do
Then create a love,
and conform it to my needs,
and make of it perfection,
enclose it is an image
so it never changes
That's your flaw
you're stuck in your illusion,
never here
for the real me
Copyright ©
Jacquelynne
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2004-07-02 22:34:56]
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Re: Stuck in Your Illusion
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by spooky on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:43:57 AM AEST
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| if they care for you ,,it's not a Illusion,,but there world could be where they hide the true self afraid of losing something ,,maybe even you,,well written a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Stuck in Your Illusion
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:01:31 AM AEST
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Brilliant poem his loss your gain
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Stuck in Your Illusion
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:33:08 AM AEST
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yes it's deffo his loss hun, great write,
pixie xx |
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