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Reminding me of you
Contributed by
Lost_Shadow
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:11:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The pale face of the bright full moon,
Brings picturesof the times we have spent.
Not being with you like the earth shifting,
Plates tearing themselves apart.
The gentle breeze flowing as gentle as your voice.
The stars out bright not as bright as the moon
Like all the girls I see around you.
Nothing can amount to the beauty of the full shine
Radiating off your warm bright smile.
Like a creature of the darkness, I fall,
Trapped within the song of the moon.
The lake as beautiful as your eyes, as fluid as your hair
An emotion I am not yet used to captivating my very escence
Wanting to be by your side once more
Never leaving or hurting you again.
To be there when I am needed, even someone else ahs beaten me to it.
The little raindrops like tears from the moon
Tells me when you are sad,
Wiping it away with a sleeve from your cheek
Knowing if it is true of what I have.
Yet only when I know that I barely care for anyone
I knew for you was different
I sit here looking at the moon
By this ever beautiful lake
Remembering the things we have been through
As the moon reminds me of you
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Lost_Shadow
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2004-07-02 19:11:15]
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Re: Reminding me of you
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by SpreadYourWings on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:52:45 PM AEST
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"Never leaving or hurting you again.
To be there when I am needed, even someone else ahs beaten me to it"
I love this line, it reflects exactly how I'm going through. This poem is beautiful. |
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Re: Reminding me of you
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:49:06 PM AEST
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Oh wow... I love this, you captured it so perfectly.... the imagery is breathtaking... absolutely beautiful. I'm half speechless.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Reminding me of you
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 02:06:03 AM AEST
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beautifully done! there is still no device for illustrating love quite like Nature, and you have used it well. Bravo!
Andrew |
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Re: Reminding me of you
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:46:35 AM AEST
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you have a real talent for writieng , this is beautiful..
pixie xx |
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Re: Reminding me of you
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:06:52 PM AEST
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| kinda reminds me of someone. tis jst beautiful. |
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Re: Reminding me of you
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:56:10 AM AEST
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I could just float on this. I hope all the wonder contain here proves out to be real for you.
Stitch |
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