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An Angel's Kiss
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:51:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Kissing your sweet lips,
Holding you in my arms,
And as your hand found mine
You made me feel so alive
These tears that rolled down my heart
You wiped them away with your kisses
And holding you in my arms
Rooted me to the ground
And looking into your ocean blue eyes
Gave me reason to live
And my heart melted as you asked
So innocently, if I would kiss you
And as I bent to your lips
And our passion, ignited with a kiss,
Soared to the highest clouds
I thought I was a lost cause
Destroyed by the worlds hate and pessimism,
But like the angel you are
You picked me up from the dusty ground
And saved me when I thought I couldn't be
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2004-07-02 17:51:31]
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 06:39:08 PM AEST
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refreshing write
Michelle |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 06:54:37 PM AEST
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oh! this is beautiful joel, very sweet! congrats on your graduation too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by Joker17 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:39:18 PM AEST
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Joel, you could have fooled me. I can't believe more words of love aren't on your mind. You've read so many of my poems, and yours are great, maybe you should expand, and write many more. I think you're doing a wonderful job in all you write. Please do more like these. Congratulations as well. Life now truly begins, just be happy in everything you do.
Joel Samuelson (Joker17) |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by venkat on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:10:00 AM AEST
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| Awww..this is totally beautiful..welldone my friend...venkat |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 02:13:21 AM AEST
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I'm glad to see this sort of Light flowing from your pen. May it grow and prosper! And this is a fine piece, very simple and eloquent. Well done!
Andrew |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by spooky on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:25:22 AM AEST
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| well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by Kie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:47:33 AM AEST
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The title really complimented the feeling of the poem. Soft, romantic, tender and really beautifully expressed. A positive light shines from this poem and it is something to be very proud of.
I am impressed as always Joel.
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:47:59 AM AEST
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lovely write,
pixie xx |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:40:41 AM AEST
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Joel...
This was utterly amazing and the last three lines made me all misty eyed.
I'm so incredibly happy for you and hope to god that this works out.
This has got to be my favorite from you now.
I still say what I'm saying now cheapens this amazing piece of work.
It's beautiful and I do hope you showed it to her. I really do. |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by Dupa on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:48:37 AM AEST
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| A beautifully positive, refreshing poem. |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by Chanti on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:41:07 PM AEST
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| Beautiful... Happy that youve found such a special girl! Im sure you deserve her |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by waos on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:02:01 PM AEST
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| that was sweet, i liked it. |
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Re: An Angel's Kiss
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:16:06 PM AEST
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wow joel, this was a very well written and clearly detailed poem.
Though many of your poems are dark and mysterious, this poem is done just as good, if not better.
I really hope that your graduation went well, and I hope that this "angel" you speak of helps you realize everything that you have to live for.
I can't wait to read another one of your poems, you are an awesome writer, keep up the great writes!
hugs n' kisses
-wave-
*~Alicia~* |
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