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Inside
Contributed by
Bones
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:57:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Forgotten love
Sits and waits
Thinking of yesterday
He's looks for answers in the bottle
Broken and blind
He waits for his lost love
A woman he met in his youth
A woman that only he cared about
He tries to look past his epiphany
But nothing seems to help
The TV's on
No one's around
The radio's blasting
Not one sound
A rope hangs from the ceiling
Below the attic, no one sees
How broken this man has become
I fear that one day
His life will crack
And he will exist
No more...
Copyright ©
Bones
... [
2004-07-02 14:57:26]
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Re: Inside
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by waos on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:42:21 PM AEST
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| don't really know what to say about it, but i liked it. it's a sad story but the words go together pretty good. |
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Re: Inside
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by lost_angeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:09:02 AM AEST
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nice story!!! but it is sad the way he waits for his lost love
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Re: Inside
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:51:03 PM AEST
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| this is such a sad poem. good, but very sad |
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