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Contributed by xthe_lonely_onex on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:52:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I can't stand this pain anymore
Can't you see it's all hard to ignore
You say that I am pessimistic but what do you know
What proof do you have to show
I'm sorry I'm depressed and all alone
I'm sorry that I cry when I'm on the phone
I can't help the fact that I wish I was with him
I would do anything, I would fulfill his every whim
We used to be in love but now it is gone
So I would like to write this to say so long
I'll be leaving here today
And no, I'm not okay
I don't know why you couldn't see this before
My reality is such a bore
I dream every night but those things are just dreams
Like radiant light bouncing off of you like sun beams
I'm living in a nightmare and when will it stop
Will it stop when I reach the top
I want to jump off into my blackend sea
There and only there I can be really me
Somedays I can't stop thinking about you and it drives me crazy inside my head
Can't you see that I'd sometimes rather be dead
I fall deeper in love with you every day
But why can't I make these feelings go away
It's not fair to live a life full of lies
And having to say half-hearted goodbyes
I'm sick of leaving all by myself
And have myself put up on a shelf
Just shoot me down like you have meant to do
So I can live my life without you

Copyright © xthe_lonely_onex ... [ 2004-07-02 14:52:01]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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that was good. i could feel the loneliness and the emptiness in it. *hugs* sometimes its hard to remember, but please try to... you are not alone.

i enjoyed reading this.

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