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Again
Contributed by
firefly
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Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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And she would be my love again
---My spring bloom ----
---White petals falling ---
Love soon of her remembering
With heart so fragile--- still, my name calling
And again I rightly answer her
---in armor sure----
---and book of clues ---
My misplaced soul adoring her
To mine-- allure the one I choose
firefly© 10-14-02
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firefly
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2002-10-23 06:00:00]
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Re: Again
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 06:07:07 AM AEST
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| Short but sweet,good write! Christina |
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Re: Again
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by MisterRight on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 06:18:15 AM AEST
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That's really beautiful
Curtis |
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Re: Again
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by nebill on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 07:27:57 AM AEST
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| Have had these feelings...nice to see 'em in words! Good write! |
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Re: Again
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:23:53 PM AEST
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The part where you said "my misplaced soul"... I loved that line because I can relate to it! My soul is feeling really misplaced right now...
Great write!
Gin |
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