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monomania

Contributed by ladyfawn on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:26:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry
















i would walk until i could no longer
breathe; just to see you again
but the walk would be in vain

when i was with you, all of life was there
life's pieces no longer fit
i do not like this one little bit

over and over again i had to make a go
i've had to be strong; its understood
but i cannot explain what i have withstood

word's wings; all my thoughts fly to you
i knew there would be days like this
when i cannot help but reminisce

yet; something deep inside me changed
sitting here in limbo like a bird without a song
right now i do not feel so strong

just me and my thoughts, dreaming far away
jealous of the angels who touch your soul
innocent tranquil beings, i've no control


in death we will again find some release
together again; we will find peace

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Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:41:39 PM AEST
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"word's wings; all my thoughts fly to you" - LOVE that line! This is beautiful Nessa, but you seem so tormented... beautifully put though.

~ Dee


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:01:13 AM AEST
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hmmmmm...Nessa..my desr friend..it touches the heart ....oh..hugs and love..
venkat


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:32:38 AM AEST
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The words you use enthrall me.
Lovely write.


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:49:05 AM AEST
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So beautiful and yet so sad

just me and my thoughts, dreaming far away
jealous of the angels who touch your soul
innocent tranquil beings, i've no control


in death we will again find some release
together again; we will find peace

Especially loved these words unique august

Love Sweetangelukxxxxxxx


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 05:04:53 AM AEST
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beautifully written,,if your heart is true you will be together,,a friend in words,,spooky


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:37:21 AM AEST
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Your sorrow and pain is beautifully expressed in this piece. Nessa, I wish I could help you feel better. I am here for your, my dear.

Rita


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:56:41 AM AEST
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this made me relaise how lucky I am to still have my love, I am so sorry for your loss, you have written it with beauty and strength...

takecare hugs,

pixie xx


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:27:56 AM AEST
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sorrow is a powerful emotion and you have written of it with eloquence.


merry


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:19:55 PM AEST
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so touching and beautiful. i know he is looking down and telling you what a great job you are doing.

Hugs,

the voice


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:32:43 PM AEST
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this isnt dark its heartbreaking and very sad. a beautiful poem nessa. loved the rhyme so smooth and flawless.
great write.
Arden


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:45:24 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking..... sigh...
Hugs and Woofies....
Jenni


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:50:43 PM AEST
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This is a ver bueatiful poem.


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:38:13 AM AEST
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Nessa,

There are no words that can express the tenderness and the spritualness in this poem. You have capitured and relayed a precious moment in time. This piece is special. And so is the author.

Thanks for sharing this poem,
J~


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:39:15 AM AEST
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Nessa these are so sweet even tho sad.
He's watching over you always and your hearts meld in these eternaal memories.
Awesome writing, girlfriend!
luv, huggs, strength,
emy


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:47:07 PM AEST
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Nessa, your writes have touched my heart and soul. You will be with your loved one again. *HUGS* *S* Cynthia


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:15:07 AM AEST
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Wonderful and touching, a never dying love...
Hugs,
Hur


Re: monomania (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 02:30:25 AM AEST
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simply beautiful




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