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In Hell
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:42:30 PM in AEST
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In Hell
i am a young child
10 years old today
i was never baptized
i wasnt allowed to pray
so it was that i died
cancer inside my mind
there was no one at my bed side
here i rest,here i die
i flew thru a tunnel
a bright light i did see
happiness caressed me
and god i did see
he looked deep within me
and said child your not saved
can i still stay with you jesus?
he said not today
so i was banished from heaven
onward to hell
sit next to satan
and his pitchfork tail
burning and screaming
demons gnashing of teeth
twisting bones above my head
lava below my feet
is this justifiable?
a childs soul demise
many are like me
a thousands childrens cries
i curse the name of god
life is so unfair
death isnt any better
trust me ive been there
suffering forever in hell
eternity it does seem
i awaken in my bed
thank god,it was just a dream
Copyright ©
Vermillion
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Re: In Hell
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:43:39 PM AEST
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I am astounded. this is amazing
pixie xx |
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Re: In Hell
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by brigitte7735 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:30:22 PM AEST
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i missed you so much!! Been craving a little demented philosophy. soooo good
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Re: In Hell
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:31:14 PM AEST
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| amazing and touching write.. very nice job...like always.. after i read your work i have to sit here for a moment and take a breath and think bout what i just read cuz its all so powerful.. everything you say jut hits me and it takes a moment to let it all soak in..your work is amazing.. AMI JO |
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by dreaded_Axe_of_gore on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:39:17 PM AEST
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| Wow, Im at a loss for words here |
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Re: In Hell
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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u've dun it again. great poem. great twist. great everything about the poem. keep it up
~allyson~ |
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Re: In Hell
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:21:47 AM AEST
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| Damn, that hits like a snipers bullet well written |
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Re: In Hell
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by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 07:00:41 PM AEST
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| another great piece.. although i dont think ive read any of your work that wasnt.. nice job..and yes thank god it was just a dream.. take care.. AMI JO |
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Re: In Hell
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 08:12:59 PM AEST
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| wow, yeah, i really hope it is not the case that that is so, because a lot of really great people must be down in hell if it is. |
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