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emptyness
Contributed by
kammie
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the brink of extinsoin
the edge of life
the cliff of hearbreak
the topple of doom
falling slowly
i thought of you
you and me
what we used to be
the soft touch
squezzie hugs
gentle kisses
slow caress
gazing eyes
the show of love for all to see
the late nights
the looking into eyes
of sparkling lights
the never ending soft stare
the show
the run
the chase
was how i got you
we felt the same
we fitted together
we went like
lavender and heather
we fell in love
instantly
an invisible bond
holding us together gently
made for one another
we were
we sat and laughed
while you'd gaze and stare
you eyes full of
love and trust
mine the reflection of yours
only peace in our world never wars
the row of past
the row of late
the one that made you leave
close the gate
i can still see your handprint
on the door handle
i move to kiss it
one last time
as this goe's on
i fill with emptyness
as the door closes
its final close
Copyright ©
kammie
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2004-07-02 13:21:23]
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Re: emptyness
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:28:18 PM AEST
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omg becky babe
thats boss!
go u!
i wish mine were that gd i feel ded empty now i need sum chocy!
c ya l8r xxx han |
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Re: emptyness
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by pixie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:36:11 PM AEST
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Awww this is lovely, you have written it very well, great expression
pixie xx |
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Re: emptyness
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by lost_angeluk on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:45:37 PM AEST
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i love this poem reminds me of a bit of me!!! good work
From lost_angeluk xx
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Re: emptyness
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by kammie on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:53:11 PM AEST
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im sorry i never post comments lately iv been lost in the moment
so again ill say sorry i hope you all read this and no hard feelings??
i always read poems because some out there are really fab!!
bye
plz forgive me :(
love kammie xxx |
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Re: emptyness
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:44:28 PM AEST
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I'll forgive you! Beautiful write, hun. I realy enjoyed reading it.
~Jen |
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Re: emptyness
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:28:56 PM AEST
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your very talented,this was a great write.
luv always |
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