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Haiku VII
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Naked tree stands bare
No leaves seen this time of year
Your beauty remains
Lone wolf in desert
Sand and scrubs are your close friends
Send out your sharp cry
Cascading ice flow
Down rugged rock mountain pass
A river of cold
Flowing winter brook
Between ice crusted bare trees
Running cold and fast
Glow of setting sun
Gives still lake a golden glow
Near hills rim lake's edge
Lily pads in pond
Some are in bloom this fine day
Where is the green frog
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2004-07-02 12:31:04]
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Re: Haiku VII
(User Rating: 1 )
by C2C on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:02:07 PM AEST
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| You're haikus are so cute. The imagery is splendid. I really like the last one. "Where is the green frog." Good question. :P |
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Re: Haiku VII
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:02:31 AM AEST
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| fantastic haikus. |
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Re: Haiku VII
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:06:43 PM AEST
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| Nature haikus. I love them all. Much peace. |
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Re: Haiku VII
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 11th September 2020 @ 02:00:13 PM AEST
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| Very nice indeed............... |
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